persuasive text

 hi and welcome to my blog today I am going to show you my writing about not banning junk food from school I hope you like it.

We should not ban junk food because students can be good so they can get a

treat at least once a week so you can keep healthy and have sugar every week or so.

How would you feel if you did a lot of chores and they gave you vegetables as a reward? I would feel like I wouldn't do any chores ever again.

Sugar can help you after you have done a marathon or an iron man race because it helps replace the energy you have lost.

When you are feeling sad it is good to have a little treat in your lunchbox so you have a brighter day.

Umbrella

 Hi I am going to show you my writing of Umbrella. This is a short film about empathy. It is a story about a boy in an orphanage and a young girl. I hope you like it.

Umbrella

Just before darkness fell, the door to Miss Elem’s Home For Children opened wide. The girl with the sunflower yellow umbrella nervously entered the orphanage before finding a home for her umbrella. not wanting to be seen, Jacob zoomed his head around the door frame so that he was hidden from view. Standing off to the side the girl scanned the joyful scene as the children searched in the box for hidden treasures.The girl smiled as she watched the young boy racing around like a floating sheep. Her smile slowly vanished as she looked back at the umbrella stand and all she saw were puddles. Her favourite umbrella had disappeared.

can you find a simile in my writing ?

Town trip recount

 Hi and welcome back to my blog today I am going to show you my town trip recount from when we went to Margret Mahy I hope you like it. 

Margaret Mahy trip

Margaret Mahy playground 20th of may 2021. We walked around the mats and the briks were placed the other way round. In the waka when we were doing the last lap we sang e minaka ana. At Margaret Mahy we went around in a circle trying to find different symbols on the circle then we gotta draw the symbols. At Victoria Square we got to explore the park. There was lots of stuff.

My favourite part of the trip was the waka because we got to go in a boat and I like boats especially ones that have oars that can fit multiple people in because I have never been in a boat like that.

Something I learnt was that Victoria Square used to be a marketplace and that eels don't know what gender they are until they are 10 years old. The bricks at the patterns were turned to be on their side so that they look really small and if there is an earthquake they can take it out.

The thing I found the most interesting was Victoria Square because there was lots of stuff. My favourite thing was the water fountains but there was lots of cool stuff like the telephone box , the statues and the Moari Poe.

This trip has helped me with my PBL because there was lots of stuff to look at. I think that Victoria Square has a lot of stuff to put in my PBL book because there is a lot of stuff at Victoria park.