me and Vincent made a slide about animals I hope you like it
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, March 26, 2021
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Hi there Ollie
ReplyDeleteNice job on the blog post!. I like how you have put so much effort into this blog post. I suggest that next time you change the colour of your writing because it is a little hard to read. What is your favourite animal? Keep the great work up.
yay ollie thanks for putting our slide on your blog :)
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hello Ollie this is some really cool facts about animals but next time change the colour of the text so its easier to see the words
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