Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Saturday, April 11, 2020
forest bike ride
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Hi Ollie,
ReplyDeleteThat is a long ride, you must be getting very fit. Your writing is great because you are making sure it has plenty of detail in it. I would be nervous doing the jumps.
Mrs Roach
Great work Ollie, you did well to clean your bike afterwards as well
ReplyDeleteOutstanding effort Ollie. It was great to read about it. The jumps sound sweet.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you should help your dad clean some of his things too?
Look forward to seeing you soon, I have heard you're getting pretty speedy over 2km.....perhaps we should have a race. I will start training tomorrow.